Friday, January 11, 2008

sun & rain

Rain falling like light from the sky,
Deep clouds that made me think of the sea.
I could hear the orchestra that plays while I'm asleep

4 comments:

Andrew Price said...

Lovely!

I really like this post, a lot.

I like very much all the, how should I say this? territory your poem covers (in only a few lines!).

I like the first two lines, but the last one really takes it into whole new terrain and is very surprising and wonderful.

I love you, sister, and how closely you listen to your life (a very vital practice!).

Eucharisto said...

Cool! Is this a haiku? It's very nice to read in the relative serenity of the evening.

BTW, hi! Long time, no write, at least on my part. I've been lax, but I'm getting back on my blogging feet. As an excuse, I have been busy with a new job(see my blog), and conferences. But excuses aside, I'm glad to see there are still posts here!

Anonymous said...

I enjoy this poem. It's been in my mind for a few days now...I like the simple it is, and yet also so vast.

Meiska said...

How pretty, what lovely way to describe things!